This was sad :( but the imagery was amazing! Great job

ah. I stumbled upon this little gem. This precious stone, this heartache of truths. Loved it. Thanks for the share!

Aargh. I loved this. I really liked the description of having him "turn and look at me and give me that slow, crooked smile". I can imagine it, and it made me melt.

The last line was perfect. You always manage to finish off in the right way!

I love all of these so much! Beautiful imagery and so realistic. Love.

these are so good. i really really liked this last one!

For some reason, it won't let me review signed in for this chapter?

Anyway, this is my favourite...but they're all my favourites, so I don't know! I loved the imagery at the beginning, and the "I could swear I'm happy". I LOVED it.

Aww. I love these. They're all so sweet. This last one describes my BFF's situation. Can't wait for the next chapter. What sets this apart from other poems is that its so true! They're all so relateable. :D

This piece inspired one of my songs :)
So, thank you.

Beautiful.

Beautifully written. The first line and last were my favourite. Incredibleeeee!

holy. crap. this is amazing. all of them are. this one in particular reaches out to me, though.

and i thought, "i'll find you in the deserts of jordan, on the rivers in egypt, in the ruins of persia, underneath the red sea. i'll find you again, one of these days." - beautiful.

you: impossibly amazing at writing
me: speechless

so amazing.

"hopeless against you
fucking hopeless" - incredible!

I loved all of this.

LOVE.