Reviews for ripping off the band aid
Carmel March chapter 4 . 6/5/2011
I get the feel of this person so well. Great job! Love all the senses...clever.
rebeccaswords chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
I like it all, but especially chapter 3!
Carmel March chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
I love the imagery. And I love that last line. Really great stuff!
TrajectoryToNoWhere chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
How very interesting, in both idea and execution... keep it up, I would say. C:

These pictures-snippets, rather-are large enough to give the idea of a person without revealing too much. Very nice.
Carmel March chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
So clever! The cookies part was great. Something about this gets to me - I'm adding this to my favourites list and I have to tell you, I don't favourite many things :) There is more to come, right?
Carmel March chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Sharp and witty. I love it! I definitely have a good idea of what this person is like.
Dani Blade chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
this is really good, you get your point across, and you do it in a way that others can really see what you mean. great job! and keep writing!
kenya chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
great title by the way
kenya chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
so good

great detail

wow

more?
lymli chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
it's so nerd, XD I agree, sometimes people looks like smart but not.
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