I love your story I hope you update soon!:):).

I really hope u update because this was a quite nice book that I found funny and cute.

Superhot chapter. I really like how the fact that they've taken their relationship to the next level gives River a sense of fulfillment. That he finally feels like an adult. It's nice how Crowe's adoration gives him confidence and a positive state of mind. It's not only his family, lots of people treat him badly. It's cool that he's decided to take matters into his own hands. GO RIVER!

As much as I like Crow, this little chapter makes him look like a giant sack of That, I'm sorry. Supposed bitch or not, it's only normal his ex is hurt and confused still. He fooled her into marrying him even though he wasn't attracted to her, of course she feels all kinds of broken. That's about the biggest betrayal there is. He doesn't have a right to complain, not by a long shot. What an insensitive prick. Hope he makes up for it by making River happy.

I think these characters are brilliant, all of them.

okay, that ending was sweet, and unexpected.

ugh, just because someone gave birth to you does not mean they deserve respect of any kind. everyone must earn it. I can see how people think it, but it's utter crap.

(i really like this story)

Ooooo can't wait for more : ) love this story

Glad to see this story is not dead. :)

Maggie is really nice.

well, hallelujah. glad you aren't dead ;) great chapter!

I like to jumped out of myu chair when I saw what had updated. I do love these guys!

This plot has promise, but I can't get past all the grammatical errors. There are sentences that don't make sense at all or have repeating words as though you forgot you had already typed it and never went back to proof read it. Also, it's odd to have southern characters use British slang

okay, so i just found this story, but I absolutely love it! River is so smarmy its ridiculous, but just like Crowe noticed, there's a sense of vulnerability to him that i find whole-heartedly endearing in a main character. I hope you do eventually continue the story, because I can't wait to see how River reacts with Ryan and what mess will likely ensue when he meets Crowe's family. :)

good story, more soon

You need to update this. I can't wait to see what happens next!