Reviews for tonight
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Lovely. You got the rhyming beautifully, I can never quite manage it like that. I love the last line.
Fragile Things chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
i love everything about this! great work. i actually wish it were longer because the concept is so interesting and i think you could take it to new and better places, but thats just me.