|Reviews for The Nursery|
| EmilySamara chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
I took Alice Sleeps' advice (I think) and read more of your work. I can just hear and see this in my mind. I thought it was something like a miscarriage or a hysterical pregnancy, but I couldn't be sure. Good for you, leaving it up to imagination.~~EmilySamara
| Alice Sleeps chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
I like this story, and the enigma of it is definitely integral, but it could be clearer. The last paragraph is dense and hard to read, and I didn't care for the slang, but it would be simple to break it up a little. I would guess that this is about a miscarriage the mother can't accept, but not 100% positive on that.