Nen is certainly an interesting character but I would love to find out more about this bond between Kuval and Calder that formed when they first kissed. More please?

Ive only just found this story tonight but read all 8 Chapters! It's so engrossing I couldn't stop reading. I do so hope you will be updating soon. )

Haha That's great. Now if only Kuval remembered. :) Can't wait to read more!

So, I really, really like this story. It's cute, but it's got a good amount of conflict and I like the characters. Something I've notcied a lot of, though, is...well, word substition. Examples are "perspective" instead of "prospective" and "rigged" instead of "rigid". I'm not sure if it's a spell check error or perhaps you...well, don't know any better because you've only heard the word and misheard it somehow (I'm not trying to be mean, but it happens a fair amount of here, and it's pretty frequent in this story...).

Anyway. Awaiting the next update.

YAY! I'm so glad that you posted a new chapter!

I hope Calder will blurt out to Nen that Kuval kissed him already! That would make for some drama and plot twists! LOL!

Please update sooner this time, I love this story so much the waiting is torture! :(

ahh- so the truth of the kiss finally comes out.

i was definitely not expecting another merman to show up. i love how you point out that calder notices the color of nen's nails. wonderful detail.

great job *tosses you cookies* keep up the good work!

O.O Oh sh****

PlEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!

where's the next chapter? It's been forever! I can't stand waiting a second longer!

I just barely found this story and it's amazing! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Noooooooo! Why? Haha you must update I wish to click the next button but there is nothing there :'(

~~DarknessesDownfall~~

Dutch and blond hah.. Dubbel post :I

Why did i found this story 4 days ago?

I just LOVE stories about mermaid/mens.

Since English is not my motherlanguage (i am dutch) i must say that i did not have trouble reading this. You have such a nice writhing style, which made me enjoy and keep reading this.

Kuval is so cute in this story. And i am wondering what Calder looks like.

Please, promise me to keep updating 3 I just... Must fav and watch this!

How is it, that i found this story just 4 days ago?

I just LOVE it! I love mermaid/men stories and all that stuff!

I must say, English is not my first language but i did not have a hard deal reading it. You have such a nice writhing style which made it really nice for me to read this.

I just... I must follow this story. I am in love with Kuval and i am wondering what Calder looks like.. :)

Do not rush.. But please.. keep writhing because, for the first time in my life i found a story i actually like to read haha.

It's been a while since i read a good story from this site. I like it :)