Reviews for The Shore Between Kingdoms
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
oh! they are just so hapless! those poor boys!

thanks for the update. great going. *tosses you cookies for writing stamina* keep up the good work. thanks for sharing!
RaeAnnLove chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
I can't say I've loved a fiction press story as much as I adore this! I've never seen a gay romance merman fiction before and let me tell you it made me jump for joy when I saw this! I can't wait for your next update and to see how the story progresses. I love the characters and your original widely you've created!
Bookworm24601 chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
At least no one's died...yet...
scarlet ribbon chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
Happier and sexyer perhaps.
PyroTech chapter 6 . 12/14/2011
ah! you ended it there? I can't wait to read further! This is sooo good so far XD
scarlet ribbon chapter 2 . 12/5/2011
It's a very intresting tale, i'll definately follow this:)
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 6 . 12/5/2011
no! cliffhanger! argh! i hope there's an update soon.

so, plenty of mental angst in this chapter. follow up with lots of action? plzkthnx.

great job as always. *tosses you pie*
xlittleredtearx chapter 4 . 12/3/2011
Whales don't breath underwater. Since they are mammals they have lungs and they need air, so they come up to the surface about every half hour or so I believe.
hazel chapter 6 . 12/3/2011
more !
Nebulad chapter 6 . 12/3/2011
Ah ! D: Update quickly please !
Malachi2223 chapter 6 . 12/3/2011
WOW! O_O Great chapter. I loved Kuval at the market, but that ending makes me want to scream, NOOOOOOOOO. LOL!

When he first went to market you put WONDERING instead of WANDERING, just to let you know.

I hope you aren't going to keep us waiting for weeks and weeks before you post the next chapter. :(

Oh and if you are on FB check out my page called The Company. It's a story I've written that I am posting there! If you do, let me know it's you if you comment! :D
Bookworm24601 chapter 6 . 12/3/2011
Oh god...
buttercup123 chapter 6 . 12/3/2011
I like this story a lot! I hope Kuval isn't injured too badly and everything turns out for the best at the end :)
Malachi2223 chapter 5 . 11/3/2011
Great chapter! I enjoyed the interaction between Calder and Kuval. I'm certain it won't be long before Kuval gives in.
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 5 . 11/3/2011
ohmygosh- an update! ohmygosh- what an ending to the chapter! did NOT expect that twist. great job with the pacing and character development. i also love the detail of the fingernails and the royal blood. thanks for the update! keep up the good work! *tosses you cookies*

(only 20 reviews? that's just sad.)
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