Reviews for What Stood Between Them
DofD chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
And this one! You should do another oneshot of these two as well. Finish it.
Lizray chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Your EVIL! How can you leave us hanging like this? I really hope you reconsider and give us the next chapter. One more chapter Marzydotes, just so we can feel complete.
xxredpiscesxx chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
PLEASE YOU HAVE TO TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT...

I loved the story, it was really great

and PLEASE write another chapter!

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chocolaterain chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Please please please make this into a two-shot, or even a chapter story. Please! It intriguing!
gabbyz08 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
I thought it was an interesting take on the age old story of two friends falling for each other and hidding it from the other. It was really intense getting into both of their heads. Have you thought about doing a second part to the story?