A good were story with some new ideas and interesting characters. I love it and really hope it will be continued in the near future.

LOved it!

I enjoy the supernatural/shifter stories. So, naturally, this one is perfect for me. Sure there are some slight problems here and there. Structurally, the only thing I would suggest is that you make sure that your conversations are properly separated so that it is easy to tell who is talking. If it is all together in one body or paragraph of text, it becomes confusing.

I realize that it has been a while since this story has been updated, and that life does get in the way. I do hope to see this story updated some day soon though.

I hope this gets updated soon, I like this second story in your series, and I find it's writing has improved from the other wolf story you did - although maybe it seems like a great improvement to me because I just finished reading the other one.

If you don't have one, I suggest getting a Beta to run through your stuff, because as a wannabe writer myself (siriusly a wannabe), I find I don't catch my mistakes till my fourth time going over something, or I just don 't have time myself to proof read.

Your Interested Reader,
Cara

Two words: UPDATE NOW!

I'm realy enjoying this story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Great story. Lovin it. Update soon? :D

GREAT CHAPTER! loved it! so can't wait for the next one! please update soon! xoxo

This is just a good chapter. Please update soon :D

Loved it! Update soon

I loved it please please please try to update when you can! !

Update soon pretty pretty please!

It's really great so far!

Uh. Leave us hanging. Be sure to update this before the year is out :)

You'll just need to edit this chapter seeing as all the dialogue has been grouped together , when really it should be spaced out etc. I'm sure something happened with a program you used ..