Reviews for Venomous Lotus
Wonder46 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
This is amazing! I love how you described the reminiscent air!
Eden Green chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
'I belonged somewhere

lost in different world

A world that seemed so majestic

so vainly pure

I was in heaven'

Aside from a few typos here and there, I really loved the lines above and you did a wonderful job. Well done!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Wow - stunning! All I can really is LOVED IT! :D
uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Ooh! I like it!

Evaporating dreams. Makes me think of misty fog... and cotton candy. Don't ask.

The title put me in mind of a venus fly trap capturing it's next victim for some reason. I don't know. I thought it was pretty cool. D