|Reviews for Venomous Lotus|
| Wonder46 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
This is amazing! I love how you described the reminiscent air!
| Eden Green chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
'I belonged somewhere
lost in different world
A world that seemed so majestic
so vainly pure
I was in heaven'
Aside from a few typos here and there, I really loved the lines above and you did a wonderful job. Well done!
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Wow - stunning! All I can really is LOVED IT! :D
| uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Ooh! I like it!
Evaporating dreams. Makes me think of misty fog... and cotton candy. Don't ask.
The title put me in mind of a venus fly trap capturing it's next victim for some reason. I don't know. I thought it was pretty cool. D