It was a slow start but the story is definitely picking up pace now. Personally i'm very interested to see where it goes from here.

Here's some reviews! Nice characters. Will they get their powers next? And I love the couple. Too cute. Do you actually know someone like that?

Scary! I WANT TO FIND OUT! Gimme more.

I guess I'm not getting it. Is the old Keeper/s four in one body? Or what? Just not very clear. I like the POV though. Very nicely written

Good thing you pinky-swore. I love all four. I can't wait to see what you will do with this plot. Nice somber tone. It fits nicely.

Slightly longer, and another female character. I'm interested to see what you will do with the earth character. Guy? Girl? Personality? I'm on the edge of my seat.

I like her. Keep em coming.

Short again, but you said they'll get longer. I'll hold you to that.

Intriguing...