|Reviews for There is No Artist in Me|
| skersey chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
I think this is a really insightful/thought-provoking topic. My favorite part is "I am no artist, for someone else has created me. Everyone has drawn upon me some lasting mark." It was a really powerful point you make...all of us are canvases. Please write more!
| Homura Kitsune chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Interesting take on life. It came together nicely in the end.
The only gripe I have is that you're missing a few commas so sometimes it flows a little awkwardly.
For example: "The right to make their own future, write their own pages and fill them with their beliefs!" and "They are no more sculptor, no more painter than I."
I think those are the only two mistakes, though.
| siopilos chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
i like this piece for its honest display in a facet of the truth. it is captured nicely. but at the same time that this is true, we must remember that it is a facet of a greater thing. keep writing :)