|Reviews for You Didn't See Anything|
| lnik chapter 14 . 12/13/2012
HOLY MOLY. Wow. AJ's making a comeback, better than ever. Where did the ghost come from? Is AJ gonna have to grant her last wish or something? Why is the frame so valuable? Is it enchanted? What are Sparkles's powers? She does have one/some, right? Love AJ's note on the ladder... How do I get the feeling that Chihuahua is gonna come back later with a black eye from trying to jump over it? Is AJ sharing the bathrooms at the whole dorm room, like just the guys, or just Chihuahua? What math is AJ in? Is he smart enough to be in honours? Is he taking Japanese? I know he'd said something about writing it on his arm... Erm-mnerrerrrr! Ghost! Dang you! Write more! What IS his schedule? I'm curious now... If AJ's like the color maroon, does he like Maroon 5? That would be semi funny... I could imagine Chihuahua getting excited watching The Voice and AJ throwing popcorn at his head and making a sarcastic comment. They would have a more masochistic Adam/Blake relationship. Sparkles could be Christina... I'll stop rambling now... Update? Please? PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE?! It could be my Christmas present... Just update. Please. Please. Please.
| Cami Errant chapter 12 . 6/19/2012
Oh gosh Alice... That was something.
Not to mention the end. That made me cry. I just... Wow. I never thought I'd see AJ so vulnerable, even if he was dreaming. And the girl, Harley, she seems amazing.
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 13 . 5/26/2012
I'm... kinda confused, but that's okay! LOL
| lnik chapter 13 . 5/20/2012
Feel free to smack me... I'm sorry I took so long to review! What's wrong with Bill's wife? Is she sick? Or am I wrong? It kinda seemed like you were hinting at something. Does Sparkles drink her coffee with extra mocha and pink whipped cream? Freckle's probably drinks hers with one packet of Splenda and a dash of cream. And, let's face it, Chihuahua has espresso. I'm watching SNL. Do White Suit Guy and Bill have a bromance going on? Seems likely... However, it doesn't seem likely that Sparkles would read. Does she have a *crushy thingy* going on with Chihuahua? Or does she have a thing for Freckles? You can ignore that last question. Pie shall save you from the voodoo magic, AJ! Don't question it (well, that's what the aliens told me to say)! Thoust needeth to updateth!
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 11 . 4/13/2012
Even though I etll everyone this, you should read through your chapters before posting them, just to make sure there's no mistakes. I'm not saying the chapters have to be perfect, but they should be the best that they can be.
The main character reminds me so much of someone in my class that it's not even funny! I told him today and I think he looked at me like I was crazy, but whatever...
| lnik chapter 12 . 4/12/2012
Wow. Possibly the *best* chapter yet. The girl at the end (Harley?) had me crying, do you know how long it's been since I've cried reading something about a person who isn't killed? AJ really is more disturbed than he lets on... How could you have been writing this in Language Arts with all those idiots talking? *applauds* My only two real questions: Will we see more Harley? And what happened to her? Update. Please.
PS: I liked the whole church bit. Giving IS better than receiving. Which reminds me, I have to bring you that one thingy tomorrow (ten to one I'll forget though).
| Cami Errant chapter 8 . 4/9/2012
Oh my gosh.
*Comes back to life by impossible circumstances*
That was amazing. I love AJ, and the school is hilarious, and I love Katie and Charlie (those two are tied for my second favorite characters). The Freckle Chick was odd, but okay, Drew bugs me, and I'm curious to know what his full name is.
Uh... I think there were a few tense errors here and there, but nothing really bad or annoying.
Okay, this was probably my favorite chapter throughout, because AJ's internal dialogue is absolutely to DIE for. You really are a genius, Alice. I think this should be published. And you should make millions, and I'll write the music for the movie.
By the way, I thought of a story based on that plot. That's how life works, huh?
Uh... I''m gonna read the rest of it right now, and hopefully figure out what breed of demon Chelsea is.
Love you and your story and AJ forever!
| lnik chapter 11 . 4/7/2012
Yay! Unfortunately I'm the uncoordinated Spiderman, so I still feel your pain AJ. What was with Sparkles? Is she the bad guy? Is Chelsea gonna kill her to win AJ's affection? Is the whole school supernatural (I probably already asked this)? I'm eating meatballs for dinner (possibly even better than pie, but who runs around yelling meatballs?)? Does Chihuahua have a GF? I pity her. How did Chelsea get Sparkles as her roommate? What are Sparkles powers? Can she seduce anyone with the bat of an eyelash? Or is she a secret mermaid? She must be friends with the mermaid in Tori. 'Maid' means virgin so what happens if the mer in question is promiscuous (or married)? Maybe Sparkles is Waverley's cousin! AJ, I totally get the needle thing, when I was little they would poke me without telling me. Can Chelsea bake? It seems she would be a little Mrs. Mehall-ish in a kitchen. You should put AJ in a fencing class! I've always wanted to do fencing, but I figure that nothing good can come from giving me a sword. Have I ever mentioned how much I LOVE AJ? Cause I do. Update? Please? Please? Please? Please? PLEEAAASSSSEEEEE? You should. Seriously. *glares intensly*
| lnik chapter 10 . 2/26/2012
Andrea: I like lists too!
Wait, you do?
Andrea: Uh, yeah? You wrote that.
I did? Crap.
Anyways, AJs ankle matches his hair now! Freckles has some real problems, doesn't she? I'd love to hear a chapter from her perspective! Is her family torn up like AJs? Does AJ have to go to any classes? Or will he just skip them? And for that matter, is he going to try to escape? Also, the MOST burning reader-angst worthy question: Is everyone as 'superstitious' as he is? UPDATE! (Pleeeeeaaassseeee!)
| lnik chapter 9 . 2/18/2012
OMG! I think I may be in love with AJ. Shove off Chelsea (no she wasn't out of character) he's mine! Crap. Now I have to decide if I like AJ or Terry better. What was up with the staircase? Is Chihuahua a caffeine addict? Does AJ like bacon? I wanna see Chaz again. Update? Update? Update?
| Brian chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Okay I don't have a fanfic profile but since you said some won't post it I wanted to post it somewhere so here it is (it'll show up in some random areas)(not on yours though)
A teenage girl about 17 named Diane had gone to visit some friends one evening and time passed quickly as each shared their various experiences of the past year. She ended up staying longer than planned, and had to walk home alone. She wasn't afraid because it was a small town and she lived only a few blocks away.
As she walked along under the tall elm trees, Diane asked God to keep her safe from harm and danger. When she reached the alley, which was a short cut to her house, she decided to take it. However, halfway down the alley she noticed a man standing at the end as though he were waiting for her. She became uneasy and began to pray, asking for God's protection. Instantly a comforting feeling of quietness and security wrapped round her, she felt as though someone was walking with her. When she reached the end of the alley, she walked right past the man and arrived home safely.
The following day, she read in the newspaper that a young girl had been raped in the same alley just twenty minutes after she had been there. Feeling overwhelmed by this tragedy and the fact that it could have been her, she began to weep. Thanking the Lord for her safety and to help this young woman, she decided to go to the police station. She felt she could recognize the man, so she told them her story. The police asked her if she would be willing to look at a lineup to see if she could identify him. She agreed and immediately pointed out the man she had seen in the alley the night before. When the man was told he had been identified, he immediately broke down and confessed. The officer thanked Diane for her bravery and asked if there was anything they could do for her. She asked if they would ask the man one question. Diane was curious as to why he had not attacked her. When the policeman asked him, he answered, "Because she wasn't alone. She had two tall men walking on either side of her." Amazingly, whether you believe or not, you're never alone. Did you know that 98 of teenagers will not stand up for God, and 93 of the people that read this won’t repost it?
| lnik chapter 8 . 1/30/2012
*jaw drops* AJ is so lucky (and yet unlucky) at the same time! Is he going to be stuck with Chihuahua? I like freckles at least... Even if she IS brainwashed. Is AJ's school 'supernatural'? I love how paranoid he is. Pie. Is Bill gonna show up again? UPDATE PLEASE!
| FRIGGIN YAY chapter 7 . 10/21/2011
XDXDXD that is so awesomely sad and angering and amazing YES. XD and the part where you said... 'I didn't quite catch but it started with "f" and my uncle smirked.' It reminded me of a song. That's name I will not state. XD ANYWAY, That was awesome and ah cannot wait to see more. I will STOPBEINGLAZY *says the person who didn't even effing sign in...*
| P.A.W.07 chapter 7 . 10/20/2011
I love your description of Murphy's Law. The way it drabbled on was perfect and, having written a report on the law, I can tell you that Murphy became a victim of his own law. Oh the irony.
Regardless, we got a little fluff in this chapter with Katie which is good because our protagonist needs something to live for and at least Bill is going so we know that the man is at least bothering to check it out.
A nice update, havent gotten to the school yet, but it is a necessary filler to get from point A to point B without feeling too chopy.
| lnik chapter 7 . 10/16/2011
Ha! But you did update AJ! Poor, poor Charlie... He may be worse off than Terry! But now I must wonder... Where are they taking AJ?