|Reviews for Letter by Letter|
| singer22498 chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Once again, great work! I like how you made the poem so that its really just someone kind of complaining and stuff. It isnt really like a regular poem at all, whjich makes it very interesting to read.
The only thing is dislike about this is that it is weird to read it in paragraph form. The flow could be improved.
Overall, another great peice of work!
| this wild abyss chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
I liked how you opened with a question. It was unique, and because of the way you presented it, I knew you wouldn't simply answer it-you'd expand upon it.
Another really great thing about this piece was your word choice/phrasing. The phrase 'half a damn' had a great ring to it, and I thought it supported your position wonderfully.
I thought this was a very good piece.