Interesting...

I really like the beginning of this. Very intriguing.

awww this was so sad but so good!

Oh my god, thank you for another chapter of this. I just love the Hunted City universe and especially Eli and Ajax, so thanks for bringing them back :-) you have no idea how happy you made me. Toby and Jerioch are really growing on me a lot too, please update this soon.

Yay I like this verse. It makes me quite happy to see that Jack and Eli are also featured in this story. Toby is cheeky as can be, and Jericho is frustrating. :)

Thank you! I am adoring Toby and Eli.

Heeheehee. I would love to read more of this "thorough and persistent courtship" ahead of them. :)

this story is so cute and adorable. Will you write more?

Oh, nice, Jericho listening and explainging, and Toby demonstrating his facets. But he also called Jericho a djinn early in the conversation - had Jericho explained that in the past, or does Toby just know a djinn when he sees one?

UM I LOVE YOU. will leave proper review soon. Just expressing the initial love for even uploading a new chapter.

wow that was so fucking cute. How do you do it?

Beautifully written with the right amount of angst. Very wound up in this story; I hope you continue (even though the status is 'Complete'...) Toby reminds me of everyone; just a little alone, looking for a place to belong to. What's up with him and Jericho? Something must've happened and I'm hoping to be able to read that bit ;)
Very sad that both weren't able to understand the reasoning behind each other's actions. Curious to find out more about Jericho's past as well. Spare us a little heartbreak?

Wonderful job. I look forward to reading more.

I love Jericho so much. Hope you update this soon!

eek! I want more! Guess it's time to check out Haunted City and hope I get it : )

I'm glad to see another chapter for this story. I am very interested in the finding out more about both characters. I like the non-linear story telling.