Reviews for alice
arrhythmias chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
the horrible part is how well i relate to this poem. but i guess it's good, in a way. it's powerful.

'but all that's going to be left/ is the skeleton she's begging to become.'
Time To Change chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Jealous. This is wow.
iliads chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I love this - the imagery, the word choice - everything. It's absolutely beautiful.
Hearts of Pyjamas chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
I absolutely adore this! I love the allusions to Alice in Wonderland, it was a different and wonderful way to express drug abuse...and it also fits in well with the concept that the author of Alice in Wonderland was thought to be an opium addict.

Great poem, keep writing :)

- Hearts x
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
small down desperate

somebody

every squeeze

locked

pills

misguided clumsy

doors

fix away

back again

one reach

up

left begging