"A fish in a glass bowl." Whoa, relatable.

"I told Liza who told Jake who told Mack who couldn't keep his mouth shut for the life of him, and the rest was history." LOL.

The end seems a bit unrealistic, I admit. Might be because it's pretty short… could have been made into a two- or three-shot without problems. But that's probably me.

This is a good job nonetheless, and somehow relatable – fish feelings! Good job on the descriptions, I like this _

That was really good. I have an account on and i have been reading there for almost two years and i have read noting like that before. Please check my stories out i signed my profile name at the top (Lazboy92216)but that was still great, please keep up the good work.

- Chris