Reviews for Secrets of the Gods |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cool. Or is it Awesome? Both? Yep it's both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is awesome how you showed them as Greek Gods. I've read some story's were the author didn't really show the Greek God side of them. |
![]() ![]() Awesome beginning.I hope the rest is as good as this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I strongly suggest you take a look at your usage of your and you're, as well as there their and they're. I think in chapter 24, the wrong "they're" was used almost every time. |
![]() ![]() OH MY GODS I NEED MORE AND CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE! One from Henri or Alex's point of view please? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was so bloody awesome :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awsome cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I speak for everyone when I ask: exactly where is that sequel? I stumbled across this yesterday, and was engrossed almost instantaneously. I was really dissapointed when I couldn't find the sequel on your profile, though... It was getting really interesting. Anyway, I really hope you haven't given up on this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I take back what I said about the mountains, though. On the other hand, this was a very exciting and fun story. BUT, I went to your profile and couldn't find the sequel. Are you still going to go through with it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this story so far. Just had to review on this chapter, though. I was laughing really hard at the part where it says: While there were arguments and personal space issues, we generally just watched TV. The most interesting thing we watched was probably how two mountains had appeared in Greece overnight but, besides that, we had quite an uneventful few days. Lol. I can just imagine how well that would go over! :-) I wish two mountains would appear overnight -it'd be fun to see the reactions to that. Also, I really liked the last chapter. The part where they were all locked in their Greek god/goddess states was kind of funny and really fascinating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this was certantly not ur best chapter it was kind of confusing with that whole aaron thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow defenit change in direction but i love it so far especially the romance brewing between henri and mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() It doesn't really seem funny to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was fairly interesting only kept my attention a little bit during the action scenes they didn't excit me that i didn't feel like i was actually there it was abitboring but the outlines were very interesing i like where this story is going |