Loved it! so cute and adorable. the flashbacks were perfect and I would've actually loved to see this as a longer story. Great work overall!

how KEET. so KEET really truly.

Lucas is an idiot. I love how you wrote it, flashback and then now.

This is a fluffmaster XD

Wow you got a lot of followers ever since;)

Advanced terminology;

Strategical Paraphrasing;

Personalised Touch towards conveying the plot;

Puns&play-ons./

How adamant have you become in English!:)) unrealistic improvement:O

As ALWAYS; Experienced-powered story.;)

Amazing.

Super cute! Enjoyed every moment of it!

Thank youuu! And good luck for your exams! (:

~SnoQueen

That was amazing ! :)

It was one of the nicest stories I've read! Wow! :) It was really well-developed for a one-shot and the title's very fitting :)

Congratulations on this one and keep on writing ! :)

Cute one-shot!

I lab ettt!

Ahem. I. LOVED. THIS.

I love the way you went back and forth between flashbacks and the real world. My favorite part was when she was in the cafe.

Good job!

God Bless,

Toddi

I love it! it was hilarious! :)

This was a really cute one-shot. It had very believable emotions in it, not to mention was quite amusing in places.

It actually reminded me an awful lot of the first Twilight novel. Please don't take that as an insult. Lol. It was very enjoyable to read. More so than Twilight, actually.

ravengal out x