|Reviews for To Look the Blind Sister in the Eyes|
| Lithium of Mercy chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Oh, I see - it's an endless cycle. The one who falls is the blind one the next time around, and then it switched because the other person falls. Interesting premise! I like the musing on love at the beginning. I was kind of wondering where Eileen was going with that, but I guess we'll never know. Well, good job.
| 11's-SevenofHearts chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
The wording of the last sentence isn't entirely clear. But, up until that point, the story has good flow and compelling descriptions. There are a few other small issues, mostly typos I would imagine. Several pieces of dialogue, I noticed, ended with commas, as in: "'I have my assistants; they are all I need,'" ...Which should either end in a period, or continue with a "she said" or some variation of it. Other than that, I enjoyed your story.