Reviews for Elisha
RedX9 chapter 2 . 4/17/2012
Damn cliffhangers. It's nice, its has some sassy humour which I enjoy very much.

The one thing I find wrong is the punctuation:

Vic,(;) George,(;) Sam, Lana,(omit) and Trixie with her halter top all have the Hunter's Stare going on. I don't recall seeing a semi colon anywhere in the story. Well its just that part only, otherwise its good.
Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 2 . 4/15/2012
Nice job! I like all the changes you made. Keep it up!

-REB
Rogue Energizer Bunny chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
Huh...

I love this. I love how it isn't just black and white, because so much of literature is and it's maddening. The world isn't black and white, it's a bunch of jumbled shades of gray. So why should our writing have a clear divide between good and evil?

Very nicely done. No issues that I found.

-REB
ohsnapples chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Its a bit gross I'll admit, but I would also love to read more! If you add anymore to it I will make sure to read!
Raoul Duke chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
I like it. Too short for my tastes, but if this just an introduction, then it's great. It's got me intrigued for the rest of the story, if there will be more.
slave to the voices chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
This was beautifully written. I love the itch/rash line. I think this works well as a short one-shot, or as a perfect prologue to set up an awesome series.

Great work!