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![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! IT WAS FUNNY! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good :D |
![]() ![]() I love this! I do suggest expanding Liam's character a bit more, we don't know much about his personality yet. But otherwise I love how this story has started out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great. I totally enjoyed reading it and I loved Jason. In the next chapter, would it be possible to bring that Liam character out a bit more? Also love how the conversations sound natural. Hope the second chapter's just as good :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh, sounds interesting so far. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is pretty interesting. It's very well written and a good idea. I have a feeling I know where this story is going to go, but I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Good job and please, do continue. :) |