Reviews for Summersalt |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aww. how cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() dat was so good wen i came to d last part it was so heart breaking so good one love it for wat it is! god bless nd wat is deir age? u never mentioned it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing! You captured the tension between them so well and managed to make it unbelievably cute at the same time. Kudos to you, i wish i could write scenes like this. XD I really like the names too, i hope when Sophie comes back to visit him they'll realise how much they mean to each other.:) Keep on writing! S. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The atmosphere at first was kind of frivolous, so it took me by surprise how heartbreaking it was at the end. I love how it shows the small mind games that went on between the two of them, and of course I was rooting for them. Because it was such an ambiguous ending, I'm going to pretend that everything worked out ok in the end. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story. Sad, but good. I think you should write a sequel or possibly continue this one. I want see what happens with both of characters after she moves to Arizona. Great Job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww this is so cute! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story's alright but it's also really sad :( are you sure you're going to end it like this? i mean, you could add another chapter to give it a happy ending :) the characters sound adorable :) just a suggestion, though. personally i'm a fan of happy endings :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I definitely think you should continue this. It could be a really great story if you fleshed it out a little bit. Even if you decide not to, it's still a really good one-shot. |
![]() ![]() Too lazy to sign in sorry:( anywho just wanted to let u know I loved your story! I think you should write like a sequel or something that closes it up! Please Please please! You'll be my favorite author like ever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. It's sad, but cute, too. HAHA. I noticed the sexual tension. Nice work :) I really liked the characters and their personalities! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kind of depressing. But you know, it was realistic, which you don't see much of now. So despite the depressing-ness, it was also kind of cute so I liked this a lot. Good job! :) Although I was confused at the very beginning. Something about a tide pulling her under, so I'd assumed she was swimming, but then she's walking towards Kai right after. Was there a break or something between or am I completely missing something? |