Reviews for Summersalt
Neverland.dream chapter 1 . 4/13
aww. how cute!
heal me forever chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
dat was so good wen i came to d last part it was so heart breaking so good one love it for wat it is! god bless nd wat is deir age? u never mentioned it?
StarScarlet76 chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
That was amazing! You captured the tension between them so well and managed to make it unbelievably cute at the same time. Kudos to you, i wish i could write scenes like this. XD

I really like the names too, i hope when Sophie comes back to visit him they'll realise how much they mean to each other.:)

Keep on writing!

S.
Tamaria chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
The atmosphere at first was kind of frivolous, so it took me by surprise how heartbreaking it was at the end. I love how it shows the small mind games that went on between the two of them, and of course I was rooting for them. Because it was such an ambiguous ending, I'm going to pretend that everything worked out ok in the end. :)
Kiss From Rose chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
This was a great story. Sad, but good. I think you should write a sequel or possibly continue this one. I want see what happens with both of characters after she moves to Arizona. Great Job!
kaymonkeygirl chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Aww this is so cute! Love it!
urtenshii chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
the story's alright but it's also really sad :(

are you sure you're going to end it like this?

i mean, you could add another chapter to give it a happy ending :)

the characters sound adorable :)

just a suggestion, though. personally i'm a fan of happy endings :D
Dreamer's Denial chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
I definitely think you should continue this. It could be a really great story if you fleshed it out a little bit. Even if you decide not to, it's still a really good one-shot.
Rivera14 chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Too lazy to sign in sorry:( anywho just wanted to let u know I loved your story! I think you should write like a sequel or something that closes it up! Please Please please! You'll be my favorite author like ever!
Too Much Info chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Aw. It's sad, but cute, too.

HAHA. I noticed the sexual tension.

Nice work :)

I really liked the characters and their personalities!
Freakleash chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Kind of depressing. But you know, it was realistic, which you don't see much of now. So despite the depressing-ness, it was also kind of cute so I liked this a lot. Good job! :)

Although I was confused at the very beginning. Something about a tide pulling her under, so I'd assumed she was swimming, but then she's walking towards Kai right after. Was there a break or something between or am I completely missing something?