|Reviews for Sable|
| 123456789876543212345678987654 chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Ooooooh intresting :)
| EnemyWithin chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I liked this story, it had a twist at the end that I didn't quite see coming. However, I did notice a few errors, and the story needs a bit of polishing. I also think that you could flesh out the story a bit more, add some descriptions, details, etc. I think it has potential, but you need to bring it to life a bit more.
| Epic MickeyGirl chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
...Awesome...Just Awesome it was short sweet and got to their death's quickly...You're awesome
| SimonClemens chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Hahaha, that actually kind of brilliant.
Sure, there were some tiny spelling errors ("taunt skin" or "were monsters and demons lurked in the shadows") but the plot was good the main boy is relatable and the twist is awesome.
| hochmodel chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Wow. Talk about a good twist ending. I did not see that coming. Great job!