Reviews for The Game
Vul chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Amazing. Very easy to follow.
ncbx chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Uh.. I find this offensive because I killed a few people the other day. Happy 30th poem! (although i wrote this when you had 49...) But, being serious and all, you are great. This poem is great. your new glasses are great. You're just soaking in a pool of greatness. :D
Time To Change chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
I liked the simplicity of the lines and the rhythm. I also liked the vaguely self-deprecating, humorous tone. But I could have imagined that xD
aussiegecko1892 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
so true
reel wander chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Dangerous game to play, though many find it exciting
Inkspilled chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I like it, it's very simple but means a lot. I think you've definitely hit on something, and presented it really nicely. Nice work. :)
tolerate chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Congratulations on your 30th poem. It's a great poem and for some reasons, the image is a circus and a clown is killing another person. I agree with the last line. :)
Mirabella chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
I like the clever mismatched joy and messages here! It's kind of playful in a serious way. :)
Rosie chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
I like this an awful lot
littleducklinglove chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
sounds like a fun game to me!