Aww! C:

Why does it end like that? o.O it shouldve ended with claudia and something or other..

oh well, good job. ;3

o.o

That's very emotionful.

Sad.

Wow, that was really good! You did a wonderful job of touching on a sensitive topic. I love that the main character was a guy because it's not something that we're often exposed to, so we just assume that it doesn't happen to them. Great job, and I thought Tim and Drake's friendship was adorable and really sweet:)

Dude seriously why did you stop? Keep going, add more and more. I mean, seriously nine chapters is not enough. This story is a different view on weight and really good. It's not all over the top high school drama sob story, but something i can actually see happening. People can definitely relate to this, and... dammit I wanna know the rest of Drake's story! He seems like a pretty chill kid, he needs to get the girl okay! Team Drake and shit. lol

okay, i said last night that i 'can't wait to read more', because me (being the genius that i am) did not see that you had nine chapters of this great story! so here is my full re-review: i liked this story a lot for several reasons. 1. it's easy to relate to. almost everyone has problems with their weight now a days, including me! 2. its your all around teenage story. boy has problem, leads to girl problem, leads to friend problem, fix problem, fix girl problem, fix friend problem, the end! not to say your story isn't original, in which case, i have never read a story with a boy having this (weight) problem. 3. you make the reader relate to drake with those three issues. a. he has problems, b. issues with girls, and c. friend issues [sorry this is so long] but yes, i do love this story and i wish there was more. i wish it were a book. end of re-review!

I enjoyed this story very much :) I'm glad Drake finally opened up to Tim, his BFF, about his problems, and I imagine he's starting to feel good about his appearance again

This was a great read. Keep up the good work _

that was... amazing! it was one of the best stories on fictionpress i have ever read... it wasn't all sappy and so called "emo" or about death or anything unrealistic, but it was true and real and something you could read in a successful published book! wow, i can't wait to read more!