Reviews for Abandoner
weareyourworstnightmare chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
amazing this is one of the best songs it speaks to me its what my father did to me. miku
MissMarilynRamirez chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
This one sounds really sad, I can picture it sounding amazing as a song too.
weareyourworstnightmare chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
first of all, dude u really need to label the chorus and stuff. srry, just saying. i like the beat, but i think your lines are are too short, not really giving it the full impact that it can have. i also think that the message u have is good, but seriously, if u make the lines more longer instead of shortcut, itll be real cool. by the way, i agree. i think that if u leave the review u should tell wats good AND wats bad. but then again, that could be just because im not an emotional person. whatever. anyways, keep writing, wouldnt mind listening to your band.

-whisper