Reviews for Thank You
MidnightFox chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Hm.. Now I'm tempted to finish this. It really hit home and was difficult since my best friend was...hurt by her stepdad. Not even her step dad yet. I think I might finish this and send you a link in the next few days. :) I wish Jake had figured out the real truth behind everything. It had good detail and fights always get weird when it comes to punching, because when you try to picture it, it seems unnatural. Suddenly grabbing someone and pulling them back seems more natural though, but if you were to edit or continue, I'd try and describe it a bit more so it's easier to picture.
nothi1248 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Wow that was intense in a not to heavy way. I liked it a lot! Definitely one of my favorites :)