Reviews for Frozen Moments
Laoch chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
I liked the concept of the poem because it is easily relatable and really well done. The one part i didn't like was that you had a few spelling mistakes, which threw off the flow and a bit of the appeal to the story. But still, nicely done!
singer22498 chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
I liked that. you have a few typos: yout is you, sti is sit.

I like the way you described what you wished and stuff. it seems like you lost someone that you loved or broke up with like a lover that you like thought was the one.
uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
I really like the sense of loss you can feel in this.

There can be so many reasons why you could be alone now.

Anybody can realate to it.
YasuRan chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I spy a couple of typos in this piece:

'for yout to finish the crossword'

'I sti here alone'

They detract quite a bit from the overall poem, since the verses themselves appear to convey some significant event. I do like the opening descriptions of awful floral armchairs and weak tea; quite adroit.