Reviews for First Encounter
Luis chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
This has promise. I kinda wished it was a full story and not just a one shot. Your descriptions were sufficient enough to get me to know about the characters.

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earthday chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
This is really good! I loved all the descriptions - they weren't too over the top and they fitted perfectly with the amount of action happening and also made me familiar with the characters without knowing that much about them. :)