|Reviews for Elevator|
| rollinby chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
i love the way we get a real deep feel of the pain they are in, in such a short space of time
| Skyward Ending chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
This was a very nice piece. I don't have much criticism aside from pointing out how many times you used the word "yellow." I think you could've abridged and merged the two paragraphs talking about yellow things.
I really liked the rest of it though.