Hello. I'll begin by saying that I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. I think it was a creative way to portray a weirdo girl who talks to walls. Amelia seems like such an interesting character and I would love to get to know her more...eg; what started her spy-action fetish?

here's hoping for a second chapter

xD

Wow, really enjoyed that one!

When I started reading it I was very impressed with all the technical specs-thought this might be something sort of in the line of Tom Clancy. Nice 'twist', though, if I can use such a term!

LOL that was funny!Now i want some food! xD

I love this concept of a super-secret spy seen as the weirdo at school. She's posing as a not-normal girl, which is exactly what she is - she's hiding in plain sight. That's pretty much what a spy does. I love the irony!

This is a nice little piece. I'd recommend changing the friendly girl into teasing peers, because the 'weird' kids usually get bullied and it would be a nice touch to the story to show a little bit of that. After all, life's not easy for the girls, who talk to walls…

I liked this. I love how technical it was in describing the guns and this whole mission thing at the beginning, then you find out it's just in her head. I especially loved how she never broke out of character. She was very serious about it the whole time. A good read.

Haha, this is great. Kinda makes me think about myself and my own wild imagination. Thankfully I don't talk to walls, though. -

I think Amelia would be a very interesting character to continue writing about. It makes me think of that movie Suckerpunch. The way you weave reality and her daydream together is very seamless and convincing. It makes me wonder which is the true reality, and which is just the vision.

I like how she speaks about her daydream as a 'transmission'. It really makes one wonder if she's gone off the deep end.

Wow, I liked this! Well written and interesting, I'd like to read more of this.

I love where you ended it.

It's just enough to make you wonder.

Interesting. It makes you wonder if she's insane or if she's really a secret agent. I liked it. :)

-Cecilia

I like this but I think it has more to tell us than what a one shot normally has time for. I'm curious now and want to know more about this girl, her lunch, and talking to the wall and why she was talking to a wall...seems like you have the beginning of a much longer and entertaining story here. :)

SHE IS EPIC! BEYOND WORDS! I love her, and already love this story, and the direction it's going. I'm not usually into 'school' stuff, but boy, you have me hooked! Please update!

What a strange girl! Please do a second chapter!