|Reviews for The Girl Who Talked to Walls|
| SunshineRay chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Hello. I'll begin by saying that I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. I think it was a creative way to portray a weirdo girl who talks to walls. Amelia seems like such an interesting character and I would love to get to know her more...eg; what started her spy-action fetish?
here's hoping for a second chapter
| Roulon du Toit chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Wow, really enjoyed that one!
When I started reading it I was very impressed with all the technical specs-thought this might be something sort of in the line of Tom Clancy. Nice 'twist', though, if I can use such a term!
| ShioriPanda chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
LOL that was funny!Now i want some food! xD
| dail-of-the-air chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I love this concept of a super-secret spy seen as the weirdo at school. She's posing as a not-normal girl, which is exactly what she is - she's hiding in plain sight. That's pretty much what a spy does. I love the irony!
| Fierce.Imagination chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
This is a nice little piece. I'd recommend changing the friendly girl into teasing peers, because the 'weird' kids usually get bullied and it would be a nice touch to the story to show a little bit of that. After all, life's not easy for the girls, who talk to walls…
| MyFadedDreams chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I liked this. I love how technical it was in describing the guns and this whole mission thing at the beginning, then you find out it's just in her head. I especially loved how she never broke out of character. She was very serious about it the whole time. A good read.
| Dr. Self Destruct chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Haha, this is great. Kinda makes me think about myself and my own wild imagination. Thankfully I don't talk to walls, though. -
I think Amelia would be a very interesting character to continue writing about. It makes me think of that movie Suckerpunch. The way you weave reality and her daydream together is very seamless and convincing. It makes me wonder which is the true reality, and which is just the vision.
I like how she speaks about her daydream as a 'transmission'. It really makes one wonder if she's gone off the deep end.
| WeDieAlone chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Wow, I liked this! Well written and interesting, I'd like to read more of this.
| uniquely-unique chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
I love where you ended it.
It's just enough to make you wonder.
| Cecilia A chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
Interesting. It makes you wonder if she's insane or if she's really a secret agent. I liked it. :)
| A. J. Manders chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
I like this but I think it has more to tell us than what a one shot normally has time for. I'm curious now and want to know more about this girl, her lunch, and talking to the wall and why she was talking to a wall...seems like you have the beginning of a much longer and entertaining story here. :)
| PoisonedMind chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
SHE IS EPIC! BEYOND WORDS! I love her, and already love this story, and the direction it's going. I'm not usually into 'school' stuff, but boy, you have me hooked! Please update!
| sakura chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
What a strange girl! Please do a second chapter!