Reviews for Downer Danny
Fuocoso chapter 10 . 11/16/2011
I hope you know I just spent ten minutes of my life translating this xD


Umbra in Machina chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
I have translated and read this entire chapter.

WHOA! Danny sounds (dare I say it?) proactive.
Umbra in Machina chapter 11 . 11/10/2011

Now to go back to the last chapter and painstakingly decode it.

LOL... "I Am Number Ten!"
Stabheart chapter 10 . 11/10/2011


My therapist told me to write this review for your story. Who even writes reviews these days anyway? There's probably an app for it or something...or maybe just a lot of therapists who think it's a good idea.

Anywho, I think your story is bitchin' good. (and Grrrrrreat).

Au reviour (that's French or something)


(P.S it took me forever to find that squiggly line on my phone...what is that even called?)

(PPS I loved the diary format, can you tell?)
Umbra in Machina chapter 9 . 11/9/2011
It's interesting to see the development of the characters, and to have more insight into the pain Danny truly feels over his mother's death.

-UIM :)
one-touch lamp chapter 8 . 11/4/2011
i like how you set up the characters for interesting interactions/events in future chapters. For instant, what would happen if dog-psycho-triggered Monty met stalker Sally while downer Danny decides to whip out the paint ball gun.

and all told from danny's great pov.
Umbra in Machina chapter 7 . 10/24/2011

That's what Latin is all about: grammar. And it's not like anybody speaks it anymore. So Latin is only useful for learning grammar and making up cool screen names.

Love the story!

Umbra in Machina chapter 4 . 10/24/2011
I really like the style of narrative. Awesome!
S.N. Rainsworth chapter 6 . 10/7/2011
Don't stop your bitchin'. I like hearing about it. :D

(Too lazy to log in -_-)

WhatTheSpoot chapter 6 . 8/20/2011
It's interesting that you wrote this story this way- it's like you aren't giving people the FULL story. You're really only getting what the character feels like writing. I'm interested to see where this goes.
one-touch lamp chapter 6 . 7/1/2011
The "venereal commerce" part was great, but not Tony the Tiger great...

Anyway, Danny doesn't seem like too bad a guy. Yet. No sign of psychological abnormalities anyway. Hope he's not paying that therapist too much money.

Now Sally? Yea, possible psycho in the making.
Fuocoso chapter 4 . 6/17/2011
Poor Danny D:

This amuses me, though. Greatly. Did Alex inspire the wisdom teeth chapter? XD She wasn't on the laughing gas though, she was totally lucid when she got home. I was all ready to tape her when she said crazy stuff, too...