|Reviews for in fidelity|
| anachronistic chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
oh. this is fantastic and clever and it just flows. i like this.
| arrhythmias chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
this might be my favorite poem ever. seriously. it's just so lovely and melancholy and the wording is pure beauty.
'I'm aware,/ that I think,/ I don't believe in monogamy.'
| darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
I love this.
I like how the narrator seems to be skating around a justification, but comes straight out and explains herself anyway.
It's not really apologetic, but I like how there's a hint of 'I know I wasn't supposed to' in there somewhere.
And the title is clever, and I like that too.
The simplicity of this is also great - you don't waste words and you make your point without having to go on and on about it for five hundred words.
The vibe I get from this is delicate, almost, and it's really quite lovely.
. darker shade of pale
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
oh this is fluid and perfect.