oh. this is fantastic and clever and it just flows. i like this.

this might be my favorite poem ever. seriously. it's just so lovely and melancholy and the wording is pure beauty.

'I'm aware,/ that I think,/ I don't believe in monogamy.'

I love this.

I like how the narrator seems to be skating around a justification, but comes straight out and explains herself anyway.

It's not really apologetic, but I like how there's a hint of 'I know I wasn't supposed to' in there somewhere.

And the title is clever, and I like that too.

The simplicity of this is also great - you don't waste words and you make your point without having to go on and on about it for five hundred words.

The vibe I get from this is delicate, almost, and it's really quite lovely.

. darker shade of pale

oh this is fluid and perfect.