I found this to be a very raw portrayal of what high school students go through on a daily basis. I think that if you expanded it to include a narrative account of high school perils, it would make it a more substantive story. I did not notice any glaring grammatical or spelling errors. I look forward to reading more from you. :)

SURPRISE.

I was looking through the Just In when I found this. :)

I like it, but I must say that you aren't entirely correct about the guy's POV. They don't JUST look at looks, and besides, you said yourself it's a competition. MAKE them pay attention to your personality. It's a challenge. :)

-Cecilia ;)