Reviews for Flatmates Forever
RANDOM chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
Very interesting

not very inspiring

Could go somewhere

Could bomb

Will read to see how this goes
Chromes chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
This has potential. Try to reveal characters in more of an indirect way. Like when you said, "Well, my name is Jake..." There are quite a few spelling and grammatical errors as well. If you slow down, take your time and edit well this story could have potential :) Keep writing!

-Chromes 3
Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
It feels a bit rushed (and chaotic, in more ways that one) and the infodumping is really obvious, but other than that it has a good sense of humor to it and it looks like it might be a fun story.

Also, there were some spelling errors:

probally probably

unfortunatly unfortunately

lets let's

suprisingly surprisingly

proffessor professor

arcre acre

particually particularly

collage college

thats that's

luckyly luckily

scince since

cazy crazy

sentance sentence

had hand

growned groaned

Well, those are the ones I spotted on a second skim-through. And the grammar could use a bit, well, a lot of work. But like I said, on the whole, it seems like it could turn out to be a fun story.