|Reviews for Front in Galveston|
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
This is an excellent piece, all those details bunching together to form a story. The line on the milk burrowing in the belly 'like a child un-born' is a memorable one as is the whole stanza on antebellum. I like how the latter seems to lead back into the opening, thereby completing the picture.
I'm not sure about the 'since of need' part. Might have to reread that...