Reviews for What to Do About Max |
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![]() ![]() Perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyable story! The plot was really cool. That Derek guy was a bit untied to the whole story but I still liked it |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story. I just wish we could have known why Derek tried to kill her. Loved it though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not exactly the type of ending I would have gone for, but it's still okay. Also, during this entire story I've thought of Kylie as Kyle. Yea. It was pretty funny for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know how to paint a picture on canvas using words |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still love it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Almost finished... 13 chapters left. You're going to make me fail a maths exam... Or that's just my fault It's still great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally an 'awe' moment. This is amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Another great chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I keep on forgetting to comment on this. It's so distractingly good... I shared it with a group on , hopefully they'll flock to it. Your reviews must be so low as the readers have been too busy reading. Change your summary. I'll email you what I described the story as... |
![]() ![]() ![]() good writing and fun characters. and sex. lots and lots of sex ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorry to say this but so far all the chapters are so. stressing about baby idea, have sexual fantasy,stressing about baby idea, have sexual fantasy and repeat. maybe it will better in future chapters as the plot progress but its already chap 14. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww what a nice story i really loved reading it! thanx! |