Reviews for The Pack
Unofficially Rachel chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Oh wow this was really good, well writen and suspencful i'm glad i took the time to read this, loved every part of it, it had a nice flow and it wasn't a mouthful to read. Very well done :)
5popcorn99 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
It's true that it's not scary, but i liked it anyone. Good job.
Bono Tempest chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
wow, that was intense you have got to write some more. If you decide to make that into a story I am so gonna read it. nice paragraphing and your sentences flow together nicely. great vocab. good luck with your future writing pursuits. signed an undercover author
swamp13 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
love thiss (: