Reviews for Shot in the Heart
MyFadedDreams chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
This was an awesome story. I loved the whole idea and I felt you executed it rather well. The dialogue felt a little stiff in parts and it could all be cleaned up a bit so it flows better and is more understandable, but overall it was very good. Definitely an interesting read.
DuckiesOnATrampoline chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Wow! This is absolutely superb! The emotions in it and the way you portrayed these characters made it seem like the reader knows them, even though it's quite short, compared to a novel or something. It nearly made me cry... Meh, I can be emotional XD. Still...

THIS IS AMAZING! Write more!

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