Reviews for Teddy Bear: Secret
EC18 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
I love the poem. :) the rhyming made it better. :) keep on writing!
Angelissimo chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I think this is quite adorable, seeing as I have some stuffed toys on my bed which I ignore. I find it cute that a toy would speak in rhymes, since it sets off the persona better.

"I never thought that I would soon,

Be lonelier that a cresent moon." - my favourite lines!

Although I don't really see the last verse as a fitting end. I was thinking that using three lines was okay, but I was wondering where those words came from. :)

x/Candy