Oh my gosh! This is amazing. Although it started to be brutal, it's slowly starting to become more gentle. I think Jarek is really hot and him being obsessive with Victoria makes my heart race.

I'll continue reading...bye

I'm absolutely addicted to this story, please update soon.

You have amazed me yet again! Update soon please I just have to know what will happen next :).

Wait, I mixed up Gabriel and Benjamin

Ignore my last review

Is Gabriel gonna rape Mona?

This. Is. Fucking. AMAZING! And finally! Ya shouldn't be yelling at Thomas that ya love her; yell it at her! And beat Gabriel to a bloody pulp! :)

Yay! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

How is she not preggo buy now he ha

Yesssss! he found her! taht's my boy:))))

hmmmm. i wonder if it will be a one -on -one or with swords fight:DI'm sure Jarek will have no problem in defeating Gabe.

This story is great! Keep writing, really, you're good!

I like the fact that the story is not following the usual clichés, though the rape scene is really shocking.

I just can't get rid of the feeling that Victoria isn't really in love with Jarek.. But maybe that's just me.

Anyway: UPDATE SOOOOOOOON! can't wait to see the rest!

Wow... This is a really intense story overall but I feel that Jarek kind off had a total character change in the last few chapters, just pointing it out. Please update though, I really want to know what happens next!

AHHHHH! OHMYGOSH OHMYGOSH OHMYGOSH OHMYGOSH OHMYGOSH! I hope that Gabrielle doesn't get to do anything! AHHHHH! Hurry up Jarek!

lol update soon please :D

Ah I need more! I read this whole story in like an hour it's that good!

Interesting storyline c:

Aw poor Gabriel's fiancee *wipe a tear* why did Jarek do that? Update soon.