Reviews for The Dark Prince |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait.. did Victoria and Jarek get married in the end? |
![]() ![]() :) I really liked this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just ran across your story as I am new here. I want you to know that I think you did a real good job that you should be real proud of. Your story had all the twists of suspence and romance that it needed. I couldnt stop reading to even comment, so I m doing it at the last chapter. I will add you as a favorite author as I think I like your style! Good luck with your future writings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story. It was beautiful. I loved it his the king came to love her in the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely fantastic. A real joy to read. Thank you for sharing with all of us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's slightly disturbing with all the rape going on, but it's a great story. With LOTS of detail. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! I CRIED and then had to GRIN thru this chapter-it is about TIME THOSE TWO ADMITTED THEIR LOVE! THIS WAS A MOST AMAZING AND ASTOUNDING STORY Phoenix! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO FRIKKIN WAY! Jarek cannot die-everything has to work out for everybody involved including Gabriel! TO MUCH GOTTA GO TO NEXT CHAPTER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW-I was right about the girl but it still doesn't give Gabriel the right to do back to Jarek-tho sometimes revenge feels good! My heart BREAKS FOR HIM NOW and I don't necessarily want his but kicked or him killed altho some form of punishment will need to be done if he does hurt her and the baby. EXCELLENT WRITING Phoenix! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I am THRILLED to see tho angry with the other two he can understand and I give KUDDOS to Jarek for helping them altho I don't know how he would react if Victoria was harmed in any way! I am not quite sure but I will venture a guess that Gabriel was in love with a girl that the king took to his bed and maybe tossed her aside and she could have ended up killing herself but I know whatever it was it wasn't good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH HELL AND DAMNATION GIRL-the plot THICKENS, the SUSPENSE ABOUNDS and LOVE is ADMITTED-BRAZENLY BRILLIANT HERE-NEED MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I DO NOT want Benjamin to die-I would like to see him with Mona instead. When he held her in his arms he had not so brotherly thoughts tho he seemed to be startled about it. I DO WANT Victoria with Jarek-and Gabriel needs a MAJOR ASS KICKING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH BLOODY HELL-Mona is going to set a MAJOR FIREWORK EXPLOSION by carrying thru with this and get all of them into some SERIOUS SHIT! This is PURE PERFECTION! |