|Reviews for One Phone Call|
| DofD chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
| KxQ chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Wow! This is the best one shot I've read so far! So sweet.
| 5yntifik chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Let me just say that everything after Rio said, "You're worth it," melted my heart. I may or may not have felt a tug at my heart when I read that line.
Loved the plot. Great work!
| theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
So... I'm kind of sitting here, wondering why the HELL this thing hasn't got 100 reviews. This is honestly the best one-shot I've read yet. Thank you a billion times over for writing it. :)
| Anara Celebvilya chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
That was amazing. I had already read Getting the Gringa, and it was really interesting seeing what happened to Rio. I kind of like how he didn't actually end up with Jenna, it was a nice twist. And I've always had a thing for artistic graffiti. I think it looks like a lot of fun, even though, you know, it's illegal. Also, Natalia is a great character and, in my opinion, a great addition to the storyline/world thing. ) Thank you for a great read!
| dreeming chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
| Rosedreamer101 chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Hahahahaa I love it !
| Queen.Of.Cupcakes chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
I loved it. It's a great, original one shot that I enjoyed reading until the end.
| Persnickety Fox chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I never thought getting arrested could be such an entertaining plot point. I love the irony of it, too.
I like how the story was more centered how the characters interacted and less on how good the hero looked or how much the heroine wanted him. A girl doesn't have to idolize a guy to show that she's attracted to him and I'm glad this wasn't the case for your one-shot. (I'm biased; it's a refreshing change from a book I just read wherein the description of muscles and physical perfection showed up so often it reeked.)
The dialogue between them was funny and felt real, even Talia's verbal stumbling.
I'm sorry I can't give you any constructive criticism other than to proofread for missing words and "you're/your" confusion. Otherwise, I really like this story. Great job!
| Midnight113 chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Awesome work, I really enjoyed the concept with him getting arrested and her having to bail him out and then the end with her being in the same situation. The incorporation of the graffiti displaying the important messages was very creative, I loved it. Very well written. Good job!
| InkWitch chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Well. Finally. Seriously.
Cute, but I love Getting the Gringa MUCH MORE :)
| janice246810 chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
awwe! i love this! definatly well writen ! :)
| balloonfista chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Not that I condone vandalism, but love the whole vandalism thing ;)
| Alfreddie chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I LOVED IT. I love your characters! Great job!
| Zohorat chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
I have some type of a medication put on my inner lip, so I wasn't supposed to open my mouth at all (gasp!) but throughout the story I was trying not to laugh out loud. Trying and failing miserably may I add.
Good job with plot and the description. I'm up for more of your writing!
Have a nice day.