|Reviews for Who Am I?|
| Remi chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Okay? What an ... interesting piece. I guess it's one of those kind of fics that you have no meaning or if it does, you have to think about it long and hard. Funny thing is, I all saw a specific face to all these Maddys, nathans, and haileys. ( though their names would be Jordan, nick, and Kristine) I guess that means there really is an exact type out there...
| freedman121 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
This is an interesting idea; I like the comparison of the narrator with her classmates - in a lot of ways that really is how people define themselves, that is, in terms of other people. I was a little confused, however, because you seemed to switch from first-person in the first few paragraphs, to third-person in the last. Usually you should pick one and stick with it; I think in this case either style of narration would work. Also, watch out for typos and grammar mistakes such as "to afraid" instead of "too afraid" when you're editing.