|Reviews for shattered|
| the way you look at me chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Of course I can relate! Everyone feels down at times, so even when you are experiencing emotions like these - know that you aren't alone. There are several typos in this poem so I would recommended reading though your work a couple times after you write it and make sure you edit it. Everyone makes typos, but if you don't correct them they can sometimes be distracting from the piece. There are many beautiful lines in this poem and it certainly tugs on my heartstrings. Keep on writing!
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
no matter if you lose faith, but keep trustin in yourself, I mean, people can lie you, but you can't :)