|Reviews for Swallowing The Sky|
| Polaris chapter 3 . 2/25/2013
I hope the reason you havent updated this story is not because you left it but because you got caught up in some stuff for a looooooong time, because this story is actually pretty good :) I hate sad endings which is why 'Room 475' broke my heart and made me hate it (in a good, if that makes any sense). This story has the potential to become really good and I have a gut feeling that this one is going to have a happy ending- regardless of it being JessiexJonah or not.
So, well, ignore my ranting- I hope you update :)
| A-Bookworm-Named-Steph chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
I loved you other story it made me laugh and cry. I love it when stories can make me cry. I loved the zombie goldfish and Bernie! This sounds good too. I'm gonna follow you and hope that you update soon. Unless your dead and you can't cause then I totally get it.
| Serena chapter 3 . 12/19/2012
You're writing is brilliant. I came here after having just read Room 475, and I have to say that it broke my heart towards the end, but the chapters where Becka was okay were both hilarious and sweet. I also listened to the music recommendations and I'll be listening to them a LOT more now!
These past 3 chapters of this new story are just as promising as the opening of Room 475 so i will wait patiently for you to (hopefully) update it. I know It's super late and stuff, but it'd be amazing to go through the story bit by bit.
I guess, basically, I love you're writing, please carry on!
| Once-Awake chapter 3 . 12/20/2011
:) love it! You know what I wan t for christmas? A chapter of Swallowing The Sky! I can't wait to see how these two people, Jonah, and Jessie get together!
| A Person D chapter 3 . 12/6/2011
I need more!
| Your little adorable sister chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Hey there Kayla! Your story is so amazing! You need to get it published. All of them. You need to listen to all of your readers! They all love and adore you, as do I! Your stories are so good. I just wish you would keep writing them... Instead of swing dancing... Haha... Anyways. Where do you come up with the plots for these stories? You are so talented... I want you to use that God given talent to the fullest. Please never stop writing. Your stories are so moving. Even though they are not true, they are still touching showing dedication and devotion to your loved ones. That is amazing. I love you! Keep writing always.
| singer22498 chapter 3 . 10/26/2011
I like where this is going, but it is slightly weak. I also don't really like that Jessie kind of seems like she is the girl who wants to get into everybody's pants... haha i wonder what Jonah will do with that.
Love that you are using Jonah again: I LOVED room 475.
I was gonna ask... is the whole Jonah's past life going to come up?
That's all, great job!
| Aftermath is secondary chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
This story is amazing, update soon please?
| AmandaHold chapter 3 . 9/1/2011
Sorry it took me so long to review. Interesting chapter. I'm curious why Jessie would lie when Dylan was giving her a ride. I mean I get that she gets off on it but he was helping her out. And was that Jonah? He's definitely changed. I can't wait to see more of him.
| AlreadyGone chapter 3 . 8/27/2011
Very nice update.
Not much happened, but I did enjoy reading it.
JONAH. D: I want to go into your story and hug him, but I'm also interested in how their relationship is going to blossom.
Update soon please, yes? :)
| bridgettblah chapter 2 . 8/16/2011
Oh my. That seems hot. Like...God. Ahhh. So, I like Jess. I mean..I dunno. She's kinda a flirrrt. :D And Craig. :] Hehe. He's cute . Ahhhh. So yeah. Your a friggen awesome writer, like, grrrr. Haha. So yeah. Liking it so far. I think Ima goback and read Room 475...I dunno, but I feel 'in the mood' to read it.
| bridgettblah chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
Okay, I admit, I didnt wanna read this...I mean, as sad as Room 475 is..I didnt wanna see Jonah with someone other than Becks...D: But So far, Im glad I did. But gosh. I really hope this wont be as sad...Anywayssssssss. On to the next chapter.
| xXxMidnight-BluexXx chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
Finally logged in Dx
yay your back- feel good? XD
im guessing you got a brain wave then :3 sounds good so far
| AlreadyGone chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
I love you characters; I ADORE them, really.
Your ability to describe heat surprised me, as I don't think I would be able to do that in such a way that you have here.
Melanie comes across to me as that girl who just loves to talk and has an attitude when she wakes up on the wrong side of the bed, and I like that.
Craig sounds like a complete dork, though not in a bad way, more of an amusing way, which is good(:
And, of course, Jessie is pretty awesome because she has the attitude that isn't the usual one, it's unique for her which is great.
I feel like I belong to a secret club because I know what the significance of Marine Biology, though a good number of the people reading this probably know that as well. Oh, well, I'll try to feel special(:
Great job! Can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve!
| AlreadyGone chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
So, I had actually read this but failed to get an opportunity to review.
I like this analogy. It is extremely creative and something I know I would never be able to come up with. Yet true.
And for some off reason, I find it very powerful when you only have two or three words on a particular line, because it singles them out for emphasis. Very nicely done, per usual.