Reviews for My story
JasmineHoran chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Its amazing what can be said in just 9 words! Well done! :D :D
Paper Listens chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I like.
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
It's mine as well.
HaylinOka chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Beautiful, in the simplicity!
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
It's short...except that any more and it would ruin the magic in it. *Cue Luna's glitter (if you've ever read any of my reviews, I talk about her ALL. THE. TIME.)*

-Hermie
bookppl93 chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
nice. .
Kizoku Tsuyoi chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Leaves a lot of room for imagination. Nice. :)
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I like this a lot. Very evocative and relatable.
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Short, yet has a point. It's meaning came across beautifully. Amazing job, keep it up :D
DarkestNite chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
*CLAPS* BRAVO! I should get this story as my assignment for my language Arts class, that would make it sooooo much easier... Well I like it *SMILE* :D
a-creative-name chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Wow love it!
P.s : 1 down
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
so succinct!
blackrosestears chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Simple, short, effective. Perfect.
Mamadou chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Awwww...I'm glad the dreams are big tho.
Amethystars chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Short and sweet, but it hits hard. Nice work.
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