|Reviews for sleepover|
| the way you look at me chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
You have picked the perfect words to create this poem. Every one is just right. Lovely job!
| Fragile Things chapter 1 . 7/9/2011
loved the concept but i think, respectfully, there was an overuse of big pretty sounding words. it didnt flow well for me, but the concept is great and i love ur spacing style.
| ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Really nice use of language, it flowed really well. I'm not completely sure what you're trying to say in this, but that's a good thing, adds a level of ambiguity to it.