Reviews for sleepover |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You have picked the perfect words to create this poem. Every one is just right. Lovely job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the concept but i think, respectfully, there was an overuse of big pretty sounding words. it didnt flow well for me, but the concept is great and i love ur spacing style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really nice use of language, it flowed really well. I'm not completely sure what you're trying to say in this, but that's a good thing, adds a level of ambiguity to it. |