Reviews for These Words
Ashley123181 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Amazing poem, if the reader has personaly gone through this type of situation than of course they're going to understand 100% of this, and I do. This poem is exactly a life thing that many people including myself have to go through. I personally think that's how most poems should be, you should be able to feel poems, and you did an excellent job on doing so.

Good job, I'm looking forward on reading more of your poems and stories if you have any published :)
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Nice piece, it wasn't overly complicated, vocab wise, and that made it really effective. Nice bit of rhyme.
Just A Star chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
"The motions the gestures" isn't it "the emotions and the gestures" or is it as you roght it. But I love your poem, especially the end. "But was this all part of your plan" this part was awesome! Grat poem! :D